To continue writing from the previous dissertation that the writer have done.

Dear Writer, Please continue writing from the previous dissertation that the writer have done. I have got some comments from my supervisor which she asked me to add some further writing which are: 1). In the “Research problem”: write about -what is going on in the hotel(Pullman) right now?- , -also apply the turnover rate in this part as well, for example; from the data that i attached(the hotel turnover rates in 2013-2016), the turnover rate is getting higher in every year especially in Jan. 2). In the “Results”: add a little bit more about the result from the interview and questionnaire (you might just made it up). Focus more on interview(if possible). 3.) Also, I need the Acknowledgement (this part might be around 150 words).: Thanks supervisor, HR team and staffs at pullman hotel bangkok, lecturers, friends, family, etc. Many thanks