(I would like to use my free VIP feature for this essay, thanks) My teacher requests me to review my essay and he comments that I can only get a C. He advices me to use advance vocabulary and grammar. Please help to assign an English expert to help me with this essay. Thanks a lot. Teacher suggested that: The introduction can be more clear on the main point which answer the topic. Each paragraph should link back to the point I defined in the introduction. The conclusion also needs to link back and conclude my point in the introduction. However, I am only allow to write (not more than 750 words).