importance of business communication

My presentation will be maximum of 6 minutes long.
One minute for the introduction
I will attach bullet points I wrote for my introduction before. But it needs to be fixed based on the requirements and ideas of the body.
The attention getters needs to be something interesting that would grab the attention of my audience.
Second thing in the introduction is Credibility statement, Why should i be trusted with the information I’m delivering? You can make something up. Like I am a graduate for wherever or I work in somewhere (Remember I live in Abudhabi, UAE)
Third thing in the intro: Relevance statement: Why my audience needs to listen to the topic, how will they benefit from it. (knowing that my audience are business students citizens of Abu Dhabi)
Forth is the Thesis statement: You need to clearly state what I am presenting about. It has to be one sentence only. Straight forward as well.
Fifth is the transition statement so you move from the introduction to the first idea.

1 minute and half for each point in the body and there are 3 bodies.
First body: Introduction and definition of the topic
Second: Summary of all three articles which I wrote my report based on (I only need you to cover the main topics and straight forward idea, remember it is only for one minute and half)
Third: Link the topic to the UAE.
I need you to in cite the ideas within my speech. Add supporting materials and examples. for each body.
I also need you to clearly state the transition statement between each idea of the bodies.

At the end my conclusion doesnt need to be more than thirty seconds.
Restate the thesis and a clincher.
for the clincher i would like it to be linked to the attention getter you will use in the introduction

I will attach as I told you the introduction assignment I have, adjust based on the requirements I asked for.
The three journal articles I used for my report. You only can use these as materials nothing more.
My report but don’t depend on it as much because I got a 75/100 on it, but only to have an overall idea.

I will also attach the rubric which I will be graded based on.

Also, I will attach a voice note of a presentation (not my topic) that got a 99/100. so you will get a better idea of what i exactly want. I’m sure it will help you

Please follow my direction strictly because he is very hard on grading and follow it as mentioned.
Intros with all requirement
3 bodies ( Definition, summary of the articles, link to the UAE)
Conclusion

Strictly follow the time also (1mint intro, 1:30 for each body, 30 seconds conclusion)
If you can present it and see if the time matches.

please put in all your effort I’m looking forward for something really good.