Assignment Requirements: Editing
These papers as part of draft thesis in PhD, They need editing and proofreading to be reasonable as academic research. Please edit and prepare it as follow:
I. Chapter 1 draft need to revise this draft as chapter one of thesis, which has introductions and link among titles and to be clear draft with footnoting, In addition organizing these titles in logical ranking and link them.
This chapter one part of ((The direction towards a full independence of Saudi Arabian Monetary Agency through the development of Banking Control Law 1966 and viewing of the Bank of England�s experience: Causes and implications), and find the outline of this research. In addition, draft of chapter 2 to have clear vision about them. By word document
II. This research is comparative study with Bank of England and SAMA, so it�s important to clarify why the Bank of England good case to compare with Saudi Arabian Monetary Agency?, In addition it�s important to address will discuss in full details in the chapter 2 as seen the Bank of England.
According to this ranking: Chapter one should be as follow:
1-Saudi Arabian Monetary Agency (SAMA)
2-General Role of Central Banks
3-Jurisdiction of Central Banks to Supervise Commercial Banks
4-Saudi�s economy growth, overview for last decade. (New title)
(Under this title please indicates in brief to the growth of Saudi Arabia economy with overview of Banking sector success, the focus for the Saudi�s economy especially as a member of G20 and the role of Saudi government to support the international economy and financial stability in general)
5-The Saudi Arabian Banking System
6-SAMA & the Saudi Arabian Banking Control Law of 1966
7-Weaknesses of SAMA
8-IMF advises KSA to give SAMA greater operational independence
9- Comparison of SAMA and the Bank of England
10- Independence of the Bank of England, Essence of Independence & Jurisdiction
11-UK/Saudi Arabia Relations & Islamic Banking in the UK
12-Relationship between UK Banking Law, the IMF, & the World Bank, & essence of such a Policy in Saudi
13-Experts Should Develop a UK-like Banking System in Saudi & Its Impacts
Organise and linking among them and prepare the chapter with footnoting like chapter 2(attached) with their references and bibliography at the end of this chapter.
The above ranking is suggested if possible to organise it better than that.
III. Table pf contents and footnotes will be important things to redraft the chapter 1.
IV. You have the free opinion to add anything find it important to improve this draft, like subtitles and extra introduction and linking among them in academic writing.
V. This chapter 8.171 words (without the references) it will be good to be around 12,000 words if that possible after reviewing and developing this draft.
VI. The word documents for this chapter it should be like chapter 2 tablets and size of front.
VII. Organise the references in academic method.
VIII. Expand the Conclusion to cover all the chapter�s aspects.
IX. Do not forget to linking and indicating in the conclusion about the next chapters according to the outline attached.
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